The book I wrote is called The Case of the Missing spooky Haunted House. I wrote 11 pages and a cover page and a blurb. There are pictures too. I like to write books. I am going to write another book next summer.
After writing the book, I feel happy. I felt like I was a real author who writes diffrent books.
Writing a book makes my stomach feel jumpy and happy. I hope to write books every year.
If you are interested to my book, I can lend you a copy. (Either hard or soft is okay)
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15 years ago
10 comments:
Dear Gareth,
Can I get a copy with your autograph? What do you think? I like scientific fictions when I was a pupil. Good, keep on writing.
Ricky
Dear Gareth,
I am so proud of you! Can you send me a soft copy?
Auntie Shirley
Dear Gareth,
I've read your story. You're very brave and adventurous to explore the haunted house when your peers were as scared as babies. I'm very interested in the ship ride. Was it like a roller coaster? How did your team members react when they realized the haunted house was missing? Looking forward to the sequel and the next book of yours!
Best
Ricky
Dear Gareth,
Congratulations on your writing up the first book!
I read your book yesterday (Your Mom let me to have a look ^^) I tried to leave a comment onto your blog without success last night, but I am very eager to let you know that your enthusiasm towards writing really impresses me a lot! You are such a young and good writer!
I enjoyed reading your story; you included so many characters in the "adventure," and you have conveyed the spooky atmosphere well in the story! I look forward to reading your next book in the series, and also many many more to come in the future!!
Emily
Dear Gareth,
I have read you book today. It is very interesting. I really love you describe things with picture.
Do you have any reason that you have have so many brothers and sisters in the story?
Look forward to read your next story.
Shirley
Dear Gareth,
You are a 'real' creative author. Your story is so well-planned. The chapters I like a lot include:
Chapter 3 and 4 - showing detailed planning of the mission. I could imagine the characters putting up all those uniforms and well-equipped with necessary tools like walkie talkie, attending the induction meeting.
Chapters 6 & 7 - With the clever use of sound words and good descriptive phrases, the spooky atmosphere was successfully created. The conversations you wrote demonstrate your good sense of humour! I was giggling while reading, 'What are you crying about, little baby?'
Your visit to the theme park in Taiwan must have provided you with good writing ideas, right?
Excellent Job, Gareth! You should produce a fiction series. Start thinking about the second case now. Looking forward to reading your next book!
Dear Gareth,
Your mum used to be my teacher and she proudly showed us your book in a gathering.
I am truly impressed by the way you wrote. You are like a real author, writing in an intriguing manner. I especially like chapter 5 where all the fun started.
You have a desire to write and you have realised your dream by sitting down writing the book. I have to say that I definitely have to learn from you.
Looking forward to reading your next book.
Letty
Dear Gareth,
I'm also one of your mom's student and a friend of Letty. I'd love to have a chance to read your book. Being able to write is a blessing.
Karina
Dear Gareth,
I read your story. I like chapter 5 and 6 because they are interesting. I like to read the dialoges with the different characters. They are fun and lively.
You know a lot of words that I don't know. I looked up the dictionary a lot of times to find out the words.
Thank you for giving me your book. I will keep it forever.
Are you writing your next book? Remember to give me a copy too when you finish.
Harold
Hi Gareth,
Like Karina and Letty, I was also your mommy's student, and I really like your book. You have done a great job and you write much better than my students in secondary school. I am looking forward to reading your next book!
Ruth
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